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Man this comic just not want to happen. First I had a big project to finish, then the holiday, then I deleted the inks, then more work…
Hence, it’s not colored. I’d rather progress the story than fiddle with it more, I need to move on and make the next page. Chances are good I’ll come back and color it when I have more free time (or when it’s time to publish it).
Hey look, Castorius is back!
Not bad, I look forward to reading more.
Hi. I followed a link from an ad on the webcomic Zebragirl.net and just read what you have so far. It looks very good, though not much seems to happen during each chapter (I know these take a LOT of work). I am enjoying your art style, and really liked the animated spider fight. lol. One little quibble, though, forces me to comment: Kirinius never mentioned an “empress”. He’s actually been pretty closed-mouth. He mentioned the Council, his wife and children, an area half a continent away called Viyel, monsters, paladin forces, and destruction, but no mention of an empress. Thomas is the first person in the story so far to ever use that word. If this discrepancy will be explained later (probably by Castorius), well and good, but Kirinius’ reaction to the accusation seems to indicate that he believes he did tell Thomas. He didn’t.
Oh wow, thanks for that catch! That was a total screw-up on my part… the script originally had a line in it about an empress and in the several re-writes between there and here (and a… six month hiatus to focus on my day jobs) I forgot I took that out. Guh! Thank you for pointing that out, let me see if I can ninja edit this so more readers aren’t confused.